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Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
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England

0 posted 2007-03-29 12:13 PM



The Buzzword is War, but those that I saw
They gave me one hell of a fright!
With those in control the young and the old
Who cares which damn side is right?

Who’s making the rules, are they all fools?
I must follow orders passed on!
Life’s raging by while some of us die
The reasons it started all gone

Hell will not mend, as friend loses friend
It's my own life that now I must save!
God please let it end" There’s injured to tend
While some will find peace in their grave

This veteran of war, won’t say what he saw
His combatant mind has gone blank!
He was just a tool, far from the fools
At least he has Comrades to thank

Eric Davies



© Copyright 2007 Eric Lance Davies - All Rights Reserved
TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569

1 posted 2007-03-29 11:02 AM


Great write Eric. Someone once said...Hopefully a day will come, when a child asks his mother, "What was war?"

Thank you for serving.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-03-29 11:48 AM


I enjoyed this one.  In any war, the people most against it are the ones who are fighting it.  But you fight for your buddies, not for the bigwigs, wherever and whoever they may be.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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