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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2007-03-28 08:08 PM


Disguise the masquerade people are still the same,
It's not as sacred as it seems is this name.
Raging on and on with no end,
Many wounds there are to meand.
Battle constantly over stems and seeds,
Fighting for one mind's deeds.
I-AM-THE-GOD OF WAR!
Burning and burning is the fire inside my soul,
Struggling to free itself from my flesh case hole.
Ripping and tearing and fiending inside of me,
Bottled up inside not able to let you see.
Taunting and dominating tranquill peace,
Loathing for a way to make it cease.
I-AM-THE-GOD OF WAR!
HEAR-ME-BEAT-DOWN YOUR DOOR!
An anthem for fallen stars,
Sit back and count emotions scars.
RRRAAAAHHH I AM THE GOD OF WAR!
Raging on and on with no end,
So many wounds I cannot meand.
Disguise the masquerade people are still the same,
It's not as sacred as it seems is this name.
I-AM-THE-GOD-OF-WARRRRRRR!!!!

Now feel your fear, there can be only one

© Copyright 2007 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2007-03-28 08:41 PM


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The God of War currently
expresses  himself as an IUD
which is the last thing
a young soldier sees


,

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2007-03-29 07:15 PM


And you say I get intense? Good one boya!!!
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
3 posted 2007-03-30 12:18 PM


Powerful!  Intense!!  I like!!!!


~~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-03-30 12:40 PM


...and I am the Goddess of Love. lol

Gosh, Hot Flakes, you sure know how to ROAR! ~ and you do it exceptionally well! You darn near blew me off my cloud with that blast of bodacious 'bombasity'!


EA


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-03-30 07:08 PM


Powerful write Kyle!
Well done!  

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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