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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2007-03-28 03:32 PM



I saw the blooming flowers today
As I moved along on my way
From here to there, another somewhere;
A daffodil from a bulb of another year
Which I had carefully transplanted here,
From Mom’s garden that had to end
Since she was moving to assisted living
And had a gift for always giving
“You take the plant, since I can’t,
Daffodils aren’t very hard
And you do at least have a yard”
So I took it home where I live alone,
And yes it still comes to bloom
As Mom again lightens my gloom

Gloom

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1 posted 2007-03-28 03:44 PM


27 years years now my mother has been lighting mine too

I understand this

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-03-28 05:15 PM


PG~
What a warm and wonderful piece you've shared~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-03-28 10:57 PM


very beautiful.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2007-03-28 11:15 PM


your mom smiles in every bloom
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2007-03-29 04:21 AM


simply grand!.....

much applause!

Professor Gloom
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6 posted 2007-03-30 07:31 AM


thanks to you all
for taking the time to
read
and respond.

Gloom

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