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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-26 09:20 PM



Thanks to all those who reply to my poems so nicely.

Here we go,

Summer Days

It's too hot
i hear everywhere
it's too hot
i can't deny it

i can't avoid
this terrible heat
on these summer days
that are hotter
than the whole last summer

it's too hot
i'm hearing again
there's no water
i sadly say
but no one hears
they are just too weak

i take a seat
on the hot floor
under this hot sun
waiting for colder days
waiting, just waiting
for these summer days
that are hotter than the whole last summer
to end

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-03-27 07:52 AM


yeah, we are definitely going to have a hot summer this year, I can just feel it

nice write

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