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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
Posts 52
california

0 posted 2007-03-26 09:01 PM


this aint a damn joke
im gonna make you choke
on ever word you ever spoke

now its up to you
you aint gotta clue
so tell me whatcha gonna

youve crossed the line
for the thousandth time
and ive made up my mine
now listen closely to this rhym

you were a damn fool
you pushed and you pulled
making up your own dumb rules

youve stretched my to thin
standing there with a grin
but ya dont understand you aint gonna win

see now its up to me
and this is how its gonna be
theres aint no more you and me

im done listening to your lies
no more trusting your fake alibes
so this is were the we dies

im standing my ground
with this new strenght ive found
and im never going to lay it down

all you got to say is im nothing with out you
but the truth is you aint nothing with out me
im no longer going to fill your needs
feed your greeds

its over it ends right here
look into the mirror
see whos face is full of fear

i aint afraid no more
im slaming the damn door
i hate you forever more

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-03-27 12:18 PM


ouch

been there, done it

marcel
Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2007-03-29 03:29 PM


Yes, I think you have definitely moved on. Good for you!
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