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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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here they are monochromic tracings of memories that need color once more broken, chewed upon melted by the heat of our hearts pooled in prismatic pools blended into the muddled puddles of the past at last the chance to swirl them again without the shattered panes of recalling each pain no gain is taken no blame is blamed lame the excuses we made a charade of all we didn't want to see free to be kaleidoscopic within the perimeter of recall what fun it was coloring outside the box of us 64 colors 68 memories come let's see if we can color Humpty back to his little unbroken Dumpty self again ***Nothing more than a iittle blink of black ink*** ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"64 colors 68 memories come let's see if we can color Humpty back to his little unbroken Dumpty self again" I love this Marge...you know I do. Hugs & Luv, Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margie Girl, you are one adorable little poetess! With a creative and youthful spirit such as yours, you will be forever young! You exude the Fountain of Youth!  May all your misty-color memories be pleasant ones! Love & Rainbow Light, EO  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This day of drizzly skies brings me to the realize that monochromic thoughts sometimes drench us all~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
heard your heart song and I will remeber this life lesson. enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah it's gloomy here too today I'm with ya |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"the excuses we made a charade of all we didn't want to see free to be kaleidoscopic within the perimeter of recall what fun it was coloring outside the box of us 64 colors 68 memories come let's see if we can color Humpty back to his little unbroken Dumpty self again" Excellent write. Profound. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What a beautiful, creative thought! Enjoying you. Love and Joy. Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"what fun it was coloring outside the box of us" delightful Marge |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
I liked your poem alot. I think we all long for the past at one point and time. Maybe one day we'll find it together. Excellent poem. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think this could be interpreted many ways... and your blink of black ink colored many lives. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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