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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2007-03-25 10:21 PM



Dream Catcher:
I know you can not hear me, or anything.
O Dream Catcher,
why this sudden gush of tears?
O Dream Catcher,
I am a guy, I'm fifty-two,
why am I going on and on like this?
O Dream catcher,
Nothing today could have provoked this.
Nothing happened.
Why can't I stop this endless flow of tears?
Especially since they're not doing any good?
O Dream catcher,
and I remember how you came to be with me,
How beautiful it was,
How beautiful it is even now.
the artifacts and keepsakes that you left behind for me,
the slow cooker, the vial of water from Niagara,
to let me know that, in a way,
you would always be with me,
no matter where you were.
O Dream catcher,
If you reply to this, thogh I can read it,
it will not let me comment yet.
I hold you to my heart ...
wishing you and I could talk again,
Wishing we could telephone again or something ...
If I could just hear your voice again, it  would mean more to me than ... than ...
But maybe, empathically, you already understand.
O Dream Catcher,
why is it that I can't stop crying?
O Dream Catcher ...
O Dream Catcher ...
O Dream catch ... ... ... ... ...

Caught in a strange mood spell
Southern cross


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2007-03-26 02:34 AM


I can feel the longing in this.  Hope you get the call, Jaime.  
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-03-26 10:40 AM


I'm sure the call will come, when it is meant to.

Strange what we long for, Jaime.




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