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Open Poetry #40

The First Time I Saw Her

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-25 07:39 PM

Here we go,

The First Time I Saw Her

The first time i saw her
i was walking
walking through the cold streets

i was thinking about
many things
but she took them out
with passing by
she was perfect
impossible to ignore

i glanced quickly
and saw her passing by
i followed her

she just kept walking
without turning back
i didn't know anything about her
but i wish i could've known at least
her name
i bet it's beautiful

now i see her walking everyday
through the same cold streets
with that blonde hair
those beautiful blue eyes
and the face of an angel

when i see her
i always wonder
how different things
could've been if i had known her name

now i'm waiting
waiting for the chance
to at least say hi
so i can change
what happened
the first time i saw her

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-03-25 09:23 PM

Interesting 'write'!
Again, to me it seems a
fine 'slice of life'....
[that 'everyperson dejavu']
which likely all of us
have experienced?!

Applause!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-03-27 11:33 PM

And if you were never to see her again...
you would learn a lesson in expression...James

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