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byski
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2007-03-25 12:59 PM


This is to my few fans! (soon to be more, i promise)

If you can do it I can do it
If I can do it you can do it
Talking 'bout the life we live
And experiancing our little bit

So what if I have been there
And I've done more than that
Somehow, someway and more that once
Believing in more, that I can come back!

(that means my life)

Been there done that
Not anything new here
But let me tell you one thing
That I HAVE dispelled my fear

Fear of being rejected
Fear of being alone
For the thing that I cherish most
And this will be the one

The one to change your history
The one to change your life
In more ways than counting
More than counting our spite

So if you see more than is real
And if you know more than you feel
In my life I will not kneel
To the pain of everyday's deal

WAKE UP TO REALITY!
WE LIVE IN FUTALITY!
BUT ONE MORE TIME,
BELIVE IN HUMANITY!

Unorthodox mabey, but I grow on you.

© Copyright 2007 byski - All Rights Reserved
dwgpoet
Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122
FL, USA
1 posted 2007-03-26 01:27 AM



Nice sing-song rhyme scheme.
What does it all mean?

We happy to live,
will soon nuff find out.

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