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Twilight Emissary
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Twilight Emissary |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Twilight Emissary Painted on my fingertips, the moonlight Invitation to the milky touch of lingering hush Playing in the pools of gold, where night wept Happy tears, gown all spirits knelt in restoration Puddles of joy move in circular thoughts Inspired by the feelings clinging on tapered hope Where dawn once stood, bent into a smile still warm Now beckons the cooling breath of silkscreen blue The covenant seeming lay in the palm of my hand Here, where two hearts, as ours, are rendered speechless Found, in concentric questioning eyes that ache undisturbed Drinking light into castanet ardor, the quiet comes Safe within myself, the place card stirs caress Far simple for the nights compress, touched softly Come then, this unveiling blessed by time Seduction calls in deeper voice of twilight rhyme Copyright Kkh 3/24/07 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I usually don't like non-rhyming poems but yours are so different that I am touched lovely! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand ‘free associational’ (Romantic) imaging....such as: Twilight Emissaries; moonlight....painted on....fingertips; “...concentric questioning eyes that ache undisturbed” “...this unveiling blessed by time Seduction calls in deeper voice of twilight rhyme” ALWAYS a pleasure to read! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was very good as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and thus, she creates...universes smile I have missed reading you Kathleen beautiful |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Drinking light into castanet ardor, the quiet comes" It is fascinating lines like this one that make it easy to be a fan of your writing. Well done... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, she is quite a poet, capable of drawing us all into her web....Have been there many times... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Leaves me hushed! Beautiful! .....jo |
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