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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-03-24 10:13 AM



The veil was finally lifted.
True purpose was revealed.
Were we as holy as we had thought?
Were we as special as our mothers said, when held to her breast?

A small voice answered..."yes".

It was about love after all.
Undying, unfailing love.
So our search for meaning, comes back to ourselves?
The love we give is the answer we seek?

The same small voice answered..."yes".

We do have a soul, and it is love.
It travels through space and time.
Does our voyage ever end?
Do our souls get to rest?

"Yes, my child. Your time will come too. Until then, just love. Let no anger take hold of you, let no spite grab your heart. Let love be who you are, and humanity will go on."

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1 posted 2007-03-24 04:32 PM


Tina~
This is soft, comforting and lovely~

GOOD to see you gal~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2007-03-25 01:05 PM




beautifully done Tina

it's good to read you again


secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-03-25 01:20 PM


In my ever-most-humble opinion, the following is especially excellent!:

”We do have a soul, and it is love.
It travels through space and time.
Does our voyage ever end?
Do our souls get to rest?....”

"Yes, my child. Your time will come too.
Until then, just love. Let no anger take hold of you,
let no spite grab your heart.
Let love be who you are, and humanity will go on."

Much applause!!

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4 posted 2007-03-25 01:45 PM


I think this is lovely and I type my applause with envy.

I want very much to feel this again.

TinaTrivett
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5 posted 2007-03-25 03:31 PM


Thanks all...tis good to be reading here again. I'm afraid life has once again taken hold of me. Hopefully as Spring nears, I'll be reminded to come sniff the flowers of poetry which bloom here every day...no matter the weather.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-03-27 11:41 PM


Enjooyed...a lot...James
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7 posted 2007-03-28 07:34 AM


beautiful

so glad you are back

TinaTrivett
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8 posted 2007-03-29 10:55 AM


Thanks, the both of you. I have missed your poems immensely.
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