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Turn a Page ( for a secondhandpoet)
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Turn a Page ( for a secondhandpoet) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Turn a Page I understand the thoughts of you the signs of life, times lost. The wonder that engulfed us once the now of what its cost. I am here and there and in your mind, Turn a page and you will see In dreams meant for the in-between. Turn a page and look for me. Down to earth, no fanciness but passions within hold Awaiting that which will appear between these words unfold A pleasantness, no rain today just "soft" in memory with stretching room between these lines For "sometimes" to feel free. Struggling need not happen if your dreams are "after all". Turn a page for me, turn a page for you... I am here to lift your fall. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely and compassionate piece of writing! He is sure to be moved by your generosity of spirit ~ and talent!   Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I love it! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, I love this. And, thank you for always being. You have helped me, more than you know. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
It could not be better stated than what 'Earth Angel' said!....I most assuredly was once again "moved (as so often has been the case) by the generosity of spirit ~ and talent" of this find poet and grand human being! The following rather 'sums it up for me' [what I have been pondering in this seemingly ever-increasing nihilistic, transcendental world during the last several months when I have been unable to write]: "time.... lost.... The wonder that engulfed us once the now of what it's cost." The rest of this wonderful 'write' is most lovely 'energizing' re-inspiration for anyone feeling that they may have 'come to the end of themselves'; etc.! This poem dances along that eternal plane! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Linda, Dixie, Sue, thank you for your kind words.. And Bruce...my words are meant to be heartfelt for you. I am so glad to see you back writing.  M |
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