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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-23 05:08 PM


        Love-Time

Though we chance to seek
an eternal flame
of incandescent Love
at some cosmic intercept
of Time with the ‘timeless’,
‘True Love’ remains
    Time’s stranger,
hard sought...
seldom found...
ever movin’ on...
But what fine dreams
   may rise.....
In Love’s uncertain hour?!
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(All) "Journeys end.....when lovers meet"
               --- Shakespeare

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2007-03-23 06:28 PM





Startime55
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2 posted 2007-03-23 07:22 PM


You speak of love beyond this mortal realm where inner souls remember each other in a place where time meets eternity...where love is the most powerful creator....Amazing how you take the mind to that distant place (or is it?)...Well done...*Big Hugs*
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-03-24 04:23 AM


Two souls born,
created to love the other,
fate brings them together,
per chance, meeting.

But the heart does cry,
and the doeful tones,
are heard by the other
half needing its twin.

one day they collide,
and history is in the
making!

for they have loved before,
another time, another place,
strangers to love they are not.

Love has came full circle.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-03-24 09:47 AM




Though we chance to seek
an eternal flame
of incandescent Love
at some cosmic intercept
of Time with the ‘timeless’,
‘True Love’ remains
    Time’s stranger,
hard sought...
seldom found...
ever movin’ on...
But what fine dreams
   may rise.....
In Love’s uncertain hour?!"

~ The entire poem beared repeating!


Martie
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California
5 posted 2007-03-24 02:59 PM


Hi there

Love and time...two things that intertwine and yet slip hold...Lovely poem!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
6 posted 2007-03-24 04:45 PM


Yes, indeed a wonderful write!  I'm inclined to think, however, that love's hour is never uncertain.  We are the ones that think it so and thereby make it so.    
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2007-03-25 02:00 PM




"But what fine dreams
   may rise.....
In Love’s uncertain hour?!"

what fine dreams indeed
ah... an exquisite poem
Poet


DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
8 posted 2007-03-25 10:57 PM


I loved this one, it made me think a lot.
i read it twice just to get the meaning of it..it's very deep.

Good Work


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