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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-03-22 04:53 PM





Oh, to love again,
my sleepy heart awake,
feel the pulse within,
from the ashes I shake.

To touch the velvetness,
heavens wings I cling,
free me from emptiness,
a new song of love I sing.

I want to live, love, life,
loves power has mysticism,
for now I am the wife,
to loves Romanticism.

Flame flickers, bright,
a hearts candle I see,
a path leading to light,
calling, crying to love me.

Love is reborn, a rebirth,
the only ashes to remain,
cascades from a heart of worth,
where true love burns again.



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-22-2007 05:47 PM).]

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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2007-03-22 05:05 PM


Yes, I think it would be a truly wonderful re-birth. Enjoyed!
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2007-03-22 05:11 PM




Thank you Honeybunch!

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-03-22 05:16 PM


now THAT is gorgeous!!

I love it!

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2007-03-22 05:20 PM





Thank you Dixie you're an angel!...it was inspired!

Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2007-03-22 05:26 PM


I had to read this twice...captivating...I have been needing the same thing lately, to love again....

~~~kingsangel~~~

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2007-03-22 05:59 PM



Thank You Angel, may you find that true Love!

Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-03-22 06:18 PM


beautiful.
"heavens wings I cling," How I want to feel like this!

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2007-03-22 06:34 PM



Thank You Drauntz!

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
9 posted 2007-03-22 07:07 PM


I am  profoundly touched
(and humbled) by such
‘grand-fine’ (pure)
“Romanticism” as:

“Flame flickers, bright,
a heart’s candle I see,
a path leading to light,
calling, crying to love me.”
["Journeys end...in lovers meeting!"]

and, also (as always) I grandly
applaud the responses that such ‘writes’
generate from the many wonderful “Romantic”
poets at ‘P.I.P.’ !

just a small addition to their
comments if I may?!.....

Obviously, it has ‘oft been said:
“ ‘tis better to have loved and lost
then to never have loved at all....”
[The “Love-Phoenix” rising is always
a wonderful central theme!....’passion-fire’...
reigniting love’s finest ectasy; etc.....]

In my infinitesimally humble opinion....
the saddest thing is (unrequited)
‘love from afar’:

I would write:

desire wept and passion cried
to let love die unsatisfied


A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2007-03-22 07:27 PM


desire wept and passion cried
to let love die unsatisfied....

yes so true, you understand my heart well!

I agree, there is nothing as sad, as that of unrequited love~
In my infinitesimally humble opinion....
the saddest thing is (unrequited)
‘love from afar’:


May I also say, many thanks to you!


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2007-03-22 07:27 PM


What a perfectly beautiful piece of writing!
AND I love the font!
It's as though it was hand written by a maiden many many years ago.
Lovely...just lovely

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 2007-03-22 07:46 PM



Thank You Nancy, for your sweet comment! Yes I am that maiden of long ago!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
13 posted 2007-03-23 02:28 PM


ARH, I felt my own heart bursting with new born love ~ like a tulip rising from the sodden earth in spring!


EA


A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 2007-03-23 03:45 PM




Here you go Linda, Ms. Angel!

Eloise
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15 posted 2007-03-25 10:43 AM


What a beautiful piece this is.   I enjoyed it very much.
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