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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2007-03-21 10:11 PM

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After the concert
In Providence
We made our way
Through the white falling snow

You had a hat on
That seemed to come
From some other time
And I heard the tune
That sleigh bells make
When night turns thought to dreams

The road became a magic path
That took us back to a fireplace
A room with curtains drawn

Where for hours then
I stroked the strings of your violin
And music welcomed dawn

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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2007-03-22 08:14 AM

I like the visual imagery and tone of this. These ears could hear love's sighs alongside sleighbells and Tchaikovsky. Well done, John.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-03-22 11:02 AM

mmmm, that's nice

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2007-03-22 11:38 AM

Ah Tchaikovsky & sleighbells...
the hat..
your visuals took me there and I heard and saw the entire scene.
Well done.

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-03-22 11:41 AM

"When night turns thought to dreams".

"I stroked the strings of your violin
And music welcomed dawn"

loved this expression.

beauty.

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