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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2007-03-21 01:13 PM



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My world was small
when I was young..
I dropped pebbles into a pool
and watched the circling ripples
wash ashore.

Now I'm aware
when I make waves
they'll travel far
beyond
the near horizon.

.

© Copyright 2007 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-03-21 03:00 PM


Beautiful.


A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2007-03-21 03:49 PM


I loved this Nancy!


Beki
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3 posted 2007-03-21 04:40 PM


a small peral of truth, well said
jak
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4 posted 2007-03-21 04:56 PM


our waves do ripple farther than we know. great post. thanks

Jak
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Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2007-03-21 05:24 PM


And those waves can sometimes be harmful but not always....good message!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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6 posted 2007-03-21 06:49 PM


Nance~
There are those days when my world still feels small ... and I feel the ripples playing at the barefoot memories~

You charm me with your thoughts, dearest friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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iliana
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7 posted 2007-03-21 06:51 PM


A lovely bit of wisdom here, Nancy Lee!  *hugs*...jo
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8 posted 2007-03-21 11:47 PM


incredible!
ChaoticHazeLight
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9 posted 2007-03-21 11:50 PM


Childlike Innocence... I remember this
scorpio
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10 posted 2007-03-22 08:43 AM


Very sage words Tinker!!  Wonderfully expressed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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with you
11 posted 2007-03-22 10:13 AM


no doubt about it...
Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2007-03-22 11:55 AM


Nancy...A pleasure to read you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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13 posted 2007-03-22 01:04 PM


AHHH...takes me back to pleasent memories and wisdoms learned....Love it...**Big Hugs**
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14 posted 2007-03-22 02:12 PM


  It is amazing to learn how many people are touched by us... the things we say... the things we do... and it is even more amazing when we realize how much we are touched by others.. what they say... and what they do.

              Moonshadow
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Goodknight
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15 posted 2007-03-22 06:01 PM


a poem about wisdom!  You write it so very well Nancy - Paul
nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2007-03-22 06:53 PM


just remember that those ripples slowly fade away...


M

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The Lady
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17 posted 2007-03-22 08:39 PM




your ripples reach the very desert sand Nancy

beautiful...


Enchantress
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18 posted 2007-03-22 10:07 PM


~Thank you all for your great replies.
They are so very much appreciated~

Martie
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19 posted 2007-03-23 01:13 PM


Dear Nancy...Circles never end.  
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2007-03-23 01:17 PM


Indeed they do! You are a force formidable, Enchanting One!

Loveya!
Linda

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21 posted 2007-03-23 09:00 PM


Beautiful.

JeffD
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22 posted 2007-03-23 09:12 PM


I liked it good job and nice message
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23 posted 2007-03-23 09:17 PM


MOST pleasant!!
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