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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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0 posted 2007-03-21 12:55 PM

charismatic waves heave
with dynamo curlings,
blades glide like runners
on seas of glass, shards
sing and break dance
in undulating embers
of foam, conjugated
like Shakespearean sonnets
in perfect form

sea mist sprays in clouds
of haze forming dew-breath
billows on sun-lit days
and charismatic waves
surge on, as riders journey
like stones skipping on
slate-like stills of
fluid soliloquies

© Copyright 2007 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-03-21 01:10 PM

"surge on, as riders journey
like stones skipping on
slate-like stills of
fluid soliloquies"

Beautiful...much enjoyed Steaven!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-03-21 08:10 PM

This painted a picture that comes from my past...a most enjoyable time, when watching the sea taught me many secrets.
You told it well.

jak
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Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2007-03-21 08:11 PM

quite rich.

Jak
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passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2007-03-22 07:31 AM

very vivid imagery

love this!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

5 posted 2007-03-22 08:26 AM

lovely and romantic
a dancing wave of thoughts and images

jennirey
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6 posted 2007-03-22 12:01 PM

This was lovely, I could hear and smell the surf

Startime55
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Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2007-03-22 01:02 PM

This wonderful poem makes me feel like I am riding ocean waves during a storm energizing my heart and soul...Well done...**Big Hugs**

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