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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-20 09:59 PM



Well, i like this one personally...it has a very special meaning for me so, i'd like to share it.


Here we go,

Dreaming About Last Summer

Sunset,i'm sitting next to you
on the beach
i'm dreaming about last summer
hot sand
on my feet
hot lips
kiss me

the blue sea
surrounds all
your blue eyes
surround me
i'm dreaming about last summer

the sound of the waves
it's beautiful to hear
your voice is even more

the red sky,makes me feel good
your red hairs, attract me

soft sand
makes me sleep
your soft hands
wake me up
i'm dreaming about last summer

dark night,full moon
still sitting next to you
one kiss,one smile
this is all a dream
my last summer dream
'cause after that night
you left my side
leaving me
dreaming about last summer

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-03-20 10:13 PM


How sad.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-03-21 03:48 PM


Very Romantic!
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