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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2007-03-20 08:10 PM




I wrote this a while back, it is slightly different from the original, I changed it up just a bit

~~~Old Poem~~~

~~~Would be Kings Angel~~~

kings angels, lonely and cold
giving in, their heart's've been sold
hearing his song deep in our souls
feeling him stare; as we climb from our holes
listening to whispers, with deaf ears
wondering if, underneath it all
anyone even cares
web of memories, spinning
lies revealing the truth
exposing all the mysteries
of a painted youth....


~~~~Rewritten~~~~~


Kings angels
once lonely and cold
never gave up
remained strong and bold

Still listening to his song
deep in our souls
taking his hand as he
helps us from our holes

Ears now open we
learned how to hear
knowing underneath it all
an angel always cares

Web of memories wove
the truth becomes clear
rewriting the mysteries
without any fear.....

Living to give in
to their angelic dreams
our lives mended together
with love at the seams



~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (03-21-2007 09:22 PM).]

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Forever In Your Heart
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Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2007-03-21 05:13 PM


How sweet thank you!! taht is the first glitter picture I got so far!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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