The chamber of silent hell

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Open Poetry #40

The chamber of silent hell

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

0 posted 2007-03-20 03:10 PM

It takes you, takes you by surprise, jumps out from hidden places, Its strong, destructive and stubbourn.

It sticks to you, never leaving your side, linked to you, every second of every day, refusing to leave. refusing to give in.

It sucks you in making it hard to breathe, sucking out all the air so theres no life left in you, pressing down, crushing, destroying, breaking,killing off all the good things inside.

Its slowly seeping into me, the poison that breaks me, leaving me hollow, empty, scarred.
This is whats left, whats left of my soul. The chamber of silent hell.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2007-03-20 04:40 PM

sounds like you could be talking about alcohol ...this is what I relate to

nicely written

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
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2 posted 2007-03-20 06:22 PM

We find a lot of chambers in hell don't we!!?? Welcome to passions!!!! I like your first post!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

3 posted 2007-03-21 04:47 AM

Do you think I could make any improvements?

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