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MoonShadow
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0 posted 2007-03-20 07:12 AM



    
        “Sing the Song of Spring”

When God above
     sends down his love
          and birds begin to sing,
a wonderful hour
     to feel the power,
          a world alive with spring.

Amazing thing,
     this time called spring,
          it makes us warm with love;
a time to dream,
     or so it seems
          and wish on stars above.

Each girl and boy
     feels the joy,
          love blooms in their eyes;
completes the art,
     love in their hearts,
          enough to fill the skies.

No one immune,
     all dance the tune,
          the young as well as old.
Effected all,
     the short and tall,
          lovers shy and bold.

All have fell
     under the spell,
          the magic that it brings.
Through the rites
     to soar new heights
          and sing the song of spring.

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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2007-03-20 10:59 AM


"All have fell
     under the spell,
          the magic that it brings.
Through the rites
     to soar new heights
          and sing the song of spring."

Perfect Ken..
And it just can't arrive soon enough for me.
A beautiful spring song.
Very much enjoyed your words.

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-03-20 01:35 PM




perfect Sir Moonshadow
we all become boys and girls
and are prone to fall in love
under the spell of spring's sweet song

sigh...

icebox
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3 posted 2007-03-20 01:38 PM


Great!


passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-03-20 02:30 PM


this had me bobbing my head side to side

perfection in flow!

MoonShadow
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5 posted 2007-03-21 07:14 AM


Thank you Nancy. Happy first day of spring to you.

Kate, you have found my secret of youth. Spring back and enjoy the moment with the rest of us.

Icebox, thank you for the read.

Dixie, go with the flow, Milady. Happy spring.

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6 posted 2007-03-30 08:32 AM


This has a beautiful lilt to it and a happy feeling to it.  Very nicely done dear sir!
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7 posted 2007-03-30 11:46 AM


Ken~
This has such a lilting lift to it~

WONDERFUL ~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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