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Thebaer
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since 2007-03-18
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0 posted 2007-03-18 09:56 PM


Looping side holes
Loving prairie voles
Metal rapping
Nooses tapping
Lads a strapping
Nothing knocks my door
People seating
Creeds a kneading
Yet I’ve seen it all before
Pride centers
Demise enters
No ones keeping score
Worlds a wasting
Children tasting
Something newer than before
Cries watering
Eyes mottling
Just a dollar more
Ends ceasing
The Man pleasing
Only quiets the roar
What I’m saying
Needs untangling
Come knock my door

© Copyright 2007 Barry Ervin - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-03-18 10:22 PM


Knock, knock,  knock. Welcome to come out here. I like your poem.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2007-03-18 10:28 PM


Welcome to Passions.
There was something in your write that stirred my mind...to a cabin, in the woods, on a rainy summer night.  Nicely done!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-03-18 10:43 PM


I would love to get into a discussion
with you; you've written the tomes of
centuries passing, and passion amongst
all of the lines incorporated therein.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, Check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Janette
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4 posted 2007-03-19 09:34 AM


"Children tasting
Something newer than before"

I am sure this "untangling" is not about what came to my mind but for some reason this made me think of taking my grandson to the zoo and watching the prairie dogs play.  I hope it is a comfort to know that poetry feeds different images to many. *wink wink*

Welcome to Passions.  I am sure you will see lots of great reads here you will enjoy and I look forward to more offerings of your work.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

jak
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since 2007-03-14
Posts 85
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2007-03-19 02:51 PM


its got a great rhythm

Jak
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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
6 posted 2007-03-20 06:54 AM


Welcome to passions, nice to read you!!! I think you will like it here....very interesting poem...


~~~kingsangel~~~

steavenr
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7 posted 2007-03-20 12:44 PM


very e a poe-ish...nicely done...enjoy your style
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2007-03-20 02:32 PM


much enjoyed this

welcome!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2007-03-20 06:31 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your entrance post.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

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