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jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2007-03-18 12:02 PM

She sings sweetly and softly
Sifting sonnet and song
Into effortless lofting
Breathing sunset and dawn

Cup your ear in exaltation
Listen closely to her flare
Her clapping will fall gently
All who hear will be aware

She moves melody neatly
Past fellow to foe
Inhaling Sundays so sweetly
Past panes of windows

Once she whispered no words
To a horseman of hoods
And cloaked a sweet child
Alone in the woods

Her cup is not empty
But hollow to hold
Her skirt is so tempting
To place finger to fold

As willows wisp sideways
She sips sunrise and reaps
The deep shadow of days
And on the morrow repeats

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-03-18 01:10 PM

Jason~
You ARE a breath of fresh air to these forums~
Thank you for sharing !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-03-18 01:21 PM

Beautiful beautiful...beautiful!
Such a whisper of a sigh is this piece.
Very much enjoyed!

Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2007-03-18 01:27 PM

so many breathes and whispers. thank you nancy and marge.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-03-18 02:23 PM

quote:
As willows wisp sideways
She sips sunrise and reaps
The deep shadow of days
And on the morrow repeats

Truly enjoyable poem!

Love,
Margherita

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

5 posted 2007-03-18 03:41 PM

welcome
sure your not english
very arthurian

arthur

jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2007-03-18 03:45 PM

i like kind arthur, but never noticed a resemblance to the legend. would love to be english. the accent is quite nice.

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

7 posted 2007-03-19 09:01 AM

"Her cup is not empty
But hollow to hold
Her skirt is so tempting
To place finger to fold"

Fabulous visuals painted in this piece.

Very much enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2007-03-19 02:53 PM

thank you janette. its one of my favorites as well.

does anyone else have a guess as to what this poem is about? perhaps it is more cryptic than i realized.

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog

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