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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
Posts 116
0 posted 2007-03-17 11:53 PM

I wish
You would tell me how you feel
I wish
You’d stop relying on your mom for everything
I wish
You would look inside your heart
And listen to what you really want
I wish
That we could be
Together forever
I wish
That you could see
The person that
You could be
If you would listen
To your heart
I wish
That you would see
All the potential
That I see
And rely on God
And your heart
And not your mom

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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jak
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since 2007-03-14
Posts 85
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2007-03-18 11:54 AM

feels like a diary entry. great vulnerability.

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog
Jenna
Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180
2 posted 2007-03-20 03:04 PM

I agree, I love the vulnerability in this
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2007-03-20 06:44 PM

Good advice and very sweet wishes!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~
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