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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2007-03-17 11:26 AM



Shamrock Whisper

Calm imbues the subtle seconds hope ensues
As if to me, the gift of do over scents my tongue
Aside newly uncovered secrets of Trillium sighs
Accepting, as the glistening pine, arms soon open to joy
How long, beneath the quiet of winter, hushed the needles eye
Spreading soft against the wind blown wishes prompted by

I am one, in the vitality of cause, fair skinned child of the suns emboss

Sway, the magnificent light schemes of this day
Good luck comes easy on the whispers green and deep
Listened solitude, the shamrock flower to reap
Where my heart keeps by you, in the echoed flows of soft recall
Come again to lift in prayer on everlasting wing
Flickering the shimmer on my hair
It’s Spring, announced to come

Fair skinned child of the suns emboss, in the vitality of cause, I am one

Copyright Kkh 3/17/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2007-03-17 11:35 AM


I sure like the way you wrote this.
Magnus
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2 posted 2007-03-17 11:45 AM


getting sorta fancy, ain't we?  Love the
write, kiddo.....

Enchantress
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3 posted 2007-03-17 12:06 PM


Very beautiful Kathleen.
Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!

Wherever you go and whatever you do,
May the luck of the Irish be there with you.

Smiles & Hugs~Nancy

.

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-03-18 02:49 PM


This write is stunningly beautiful, dear TD!

Thank you for this true, deep emotion.

Love,
Margherita

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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5 posted 2007-03-18 02:55 PM


very delicate poetry like the four leaf clover itsself!!! Take care, you are like a diamond in the rough!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

JL
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6 posted 2007-03-18 10:18 PM


Ummm! Ummmm! Ummmm!
Very eloquent poetry, Kathy.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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