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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-03-16 07:08 PM



My Dear Heart


Finally after a long wait
she is with me tonight,
and now everything
in my world of desire
seems to be allright.

My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight.


JamesLee
12March
2007






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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-03-17 06:31 AM


I'm happy for you James

a much-deserved contentment

Janette
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2 posted 2007-03-17 08:18 AM


"My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight."

Oh!  Lucky her!

A romantic read ... enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-03-23 07:44 AM



Aurelian
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4 posted 2007-03-23 09:06 AM


I liked everything except the word "allright." It seems to be a bit too casual for the tone of the poem - maybe "alight" would be better - just a suggestion.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-03-23 01:59 PM


"My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight."

~ and may you as well, Island Man!

aloha hugs,
Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-03-24 04:30 AM


James....... I'm having such good thougths for you and your suziepie xxx RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2007-03-24 09:05 AM



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Eloise
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8 posted 2007-03-25 10:36 AM


Such a romantic write.  Enjoyed.
The Lady
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9 posted 2007-03-25 02:14 PM



ahhh James
how wonderful!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2007-03-25 06:13 PM


Thank you passing shadows, Janette, Romantic Heart, Aurelian, Earth Angel, Roniece, nakdthoughts, Eloise and The Lady for the wonderful responses...
Me and Suziepie are enjoying a wonderful trade wind filled weekend and future together...James

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