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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-03-16 08:45 AM



Friday


the day brought
a yellow valentine
warmly bold
across a soft sky
and I melted
tenderly into breath

“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-03-16 08:57 AM


beautiful and tender
steavenr
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2 posted 2007-03-16 08:46 PM


...and this is breathtaking...
ecrivan
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3 posted 2007-03-16 11:11 PM


I surely can appreciate the warm choice of words on this wintry stormy night


Janette
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Chicagoland for now
4 posted 2007-03-17 08:48 AM


Stunning word visual here.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

SmartChick
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5 posted 2007-03-17 11:31 AM


Beautiful, as always.
jak
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6 posted 2007-03-17 10:59 PM


short and powerful, my favorite style.

did you mean "breathe" in the last line?

Jak
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