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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You inspire me Lacing your mind Tightly to mine Thoughts taut Tension reaches new heights You inspire me Mind muse Lacing your soul To a creativity That stirs in your presence You know You inspire me Like empty pages in a book Beckon me Like crayons in box Draw me Like poems with no rhyme You inspire me aziza |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
So nice to have people in your life that give you inspiration. You have done it again with another piece of perfect poetry. Take Care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very cool poem here, Aziza! ....jo |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, ladies. You both made me smile. A |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Like crayons in box Draw me Like poems with no rhyme You inspire me fresh, sweet and now I feel like dancing...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as I'm sure you inspire others  |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
Very Nice My mind is like lightning |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
You know You inspire me Like empty pages in a book Beckon me Like crayons in box Draw me Like poems with no rhyme You inspire me Alison this is awesome! YOU inspire me - no easy task what with the writers' block I've got going on lol I love it girl! Caroline |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Like poems with no rhyme to inspire in every line will always be a goal of mine. But like the empty pages in a book would that my words were worth a look. Lacing souls and minds alike raising tension to new height. But,alas, 'tis out of sight for rhyming is this poet's plight... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Whoever it is that has inspired you has done their job well. Great work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Lacing your mind Tightly to mine" I do adore how your "mind muse" works for you. Great read here. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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