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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-15 11:28 PM



Well..after a preety long time out..i'm back at poetry...i really missed reading poems from you all.but know i'm back.

Something About Us

I know it's not
you best day
i know this isn't
the right time

but there's something about us
i want to say
'cause there is something between us
after all

i know it's not
your best day
it might not be
the right time

but there's something about us
i need to say
something that will make you happy

maybe it's not the right time
maybe you are not in your best day
maybe this is too soon
maybe this is not what you are expecting

but there is something about us
i want to say
i love you

© Copyright 2007 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2007-03-16 09:05 AM


aw Denis, that's sweet

nice one and welcome back

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2007-03-16 07:38 PM


As always thanks for replying, i'm happy you liked this one just as me. it became one of my special ones.

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