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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2007-03-15 06:16 AM


Less Thans

Time
keeps getting
away from me,
its meaning only useful
in the early morn
when the thoughts
are of
you.

~~*~~

Missing,
a voice
from the inside,
invisible cheerleader of giving
strength that even
she was
lacking.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2007 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-03-15 06:46 AM


I loved how you describe the deepest of thought in the first paragraph, this said so much...of the power of thought...

you have said so so much with effortless magnitisum....

Good Morning

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-03-15 08:42 AM


MzBliss~

These are beautiful remembering thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Janette
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3 posted 2007-03-17 09:08 AM


"invisible cheerleader of giving"  <----great line here!

I enjoyed these thoughts of time.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-03-17 11:08 AM


Beautifully written of thoughts I can relate to. Hope you are doing well.
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2007-03-25 02:56 PM


I hope this humble 'reply' post brings this fine 'write' back to the top of the 'P.I.P.' queue for awhile!

I was just pondering Time's fugacious whimsy before coming upon:

"Time
keeps getting
away from me,
its meaning only useful
in the early morn
when the thoughts
are of
you."

In a Universe that has been eternally expanding for some 15 billion years;
and, on a planet that has experienced relentless change for 4.6 billion years....
does 'Time' really have any 'meaning' at all? (...do we?!)

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2007-03-25 03:40 PM


nodding through the tears

It's just very raw, lately, isn't it?

love you mo

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2007-03-25 04:08 PM


thank you  Bruce for bringing it back up

Karen,  I know,  ever since the shoe poems I have been thinking about my sister and  hoping she is looking down on me and approving... life is hard...but is worth the while


M

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8 posted 2007-04-01 05:37 PM


time always gets away from me,
time for this to rise agin

Margherita
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9 posted 2007-04-01 06:52 PM


A very intense write, dear Maureen.
I am glad I got a chance to read this.

Love,
Margherita

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