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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2007-03-14 02:34 AM



Upon Uplifted Wings

While dreams are created
Slowly without rush
Shape each one tenderly
Careful not to crush

As dreams are the threads
We weave with care
Whilst persuing the paths
With hearts to share

Magically dreams interlace
With the gift of wings
Woven with love and light  
Where a heart sings

A heart upon uplifted wings
Love spreads around
Dreams whispered nightly
Is the sweetest sound  


Hope ©2007
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2007-03-14 07:38 AM


sounds like you are having better dreams than me lately

I do hope mine come back to me and these nightmares go away

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2007-03-14 08:05 AM


Hey Dixie , I do not sleep much , so these are dreamy thoughts whilst awake

Hope

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2007-03-14 01:03 PM


While dreams are created
Slowly without rush
Shape each one tenderly
Careful not to crush


and that is exactly how you prepared this...tenderly, gentle and yet, to the point...enjoyed.

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