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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-03-13 02:38 PM


I am tired of dressing to go out in the cold
Putting on boots, hats and mittens just grows very old
I am tired of ice and I am tired of snow
I am tired of plugging my car in wherever I go
The trees no longer look pretty
The snow no longer looks white
I just want winter to get the hell out of my sight!
I am tired of woodstoves and ice fog and frost
God, winter is making me weary and ever so cross
I long so for summer and planted gardens so green
I wish for fragrant breezes to carry my dreams
Of flowers and butterflies and birds nesting in trees
I am tired of winter and the mornings I freeze
I am so sick of waking up to temperatures of thirty below
I don’t want to start my car a half hour before I go
I am longing for summer – and this is all I really have to say
Thirty below really sucks when it is cold day after day


aziza

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-03-13 03:12 PM


there's plenty of room here in sunny Florida for you

come on down!

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
2 posted 2007-03-13 03:58 PM


As Dixie said, "Come on down".  Trade in the icy cold for hurricanes and tornado watches! LOL I made the trade in 1989 and I would not go back to shoveling snow in the early morning hours to get to work. Now I breeze through the darkened golf course at midnight and am there in three minutes. LOL. martyjo
Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2007-03-13 04:56 PM


Boy, can I relate! Though it doesn't get that cold here in PA... but I sure do long for spring summer and fall! And today it's actually in the 50's here! Don't worry ! It'll get here soon enough! Great rant against the elements!

Freedom Now

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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Missouri
4 posted 2007-03-13 04:56 PM


Where the heck ARE you, anyway.  Even in
Missouri the crocuses are smiling up at us.
Enjoy your work!

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England
5 posted 2007-03-13 06:43 PM


Aziza,

Don't get 30 below here, but I certainly sympathise with you, I too am not a winter lover and find it drains your energy.

You spend more time trying to keep lively in the winter and less time just having fun!

Your poetry lets me know how lucky I am....

Ivor

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
6 posted 2007-03-14 08:07 PM




"I just want winter to get the hell out of my sight!"

can't say that I blame you Alison
'specially at 30 below

ooooooo...cold

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
7 posted 2007-03-14 11:06 PM


Thirty BELOW???  omgodfrey I couldn't take that. I'm a true Florida cracker - born and raised here. Never seen snow (except for that tiny bit that fell here in '89 and shut the town down for 3 days LoL - we are so not equipped for snow)

Yep - come on down - hit the beaches & rivers. I went fishing yesterday & it hit 83 degrees here in North Florida. Too bad the fish weren't biting too well but who cares - I almost have a tan and my daffodils came up and bloomed! LOL

But bring a sweater - cold front is on the way and we're back in the mid 30's Sunday morning! A warm front for you

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2007-03-16 06:43 PM


Yes it does...James
Janette
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Chicagoland for now
9 posted 2007-03-17 08:54 AM


"I long so for summer and planted gardens so green
I wish for fragrant breezes to carry my dreams"

I hear you loud and clear and feel the same way, and agree, "I just want winter to get the hell out of my sight!"

Fun read here!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2007-03-17 08:03 PM


LOL, sounds as if you must be in my old stomping grounds, the interior of Alaska.
Cheer up! But with global warming, you'll soon see bikini weather again.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
11 posted 2007-03-17 08:43 PM


do not dress-up
do not drive out
hold your warm cup
head out the planket spout
write more poems to share
you are safe and warm here

so we will not worry about you.

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