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James McInerney
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0 posted 2007-03-12 03:26 PM



Rapture

Oh rapturous spirit how I watch thee dance,
Through the sky you glide with elegance,
Untouched by pain,
Overwhelmed by love,
Your chains of hate,
Have come undone.
Oh rapturous spirit so divine and free,
Come dance this way,
Come dance with me.


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-03-12 03:29 PM


ahhh, a free spirited dance.  It sounds lovely James.  Nicely done.
James McInerney
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2 posted 2007-03-12 04:02 PM


Thankyou for your comments it means alot
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-03-14 08:05 PM




"Untouched by pain,
Overwhelmed by love,
Your chains of hate,
Have come undone."

beautiful James


steavenr
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4 posted 2007-03-15 12:00 PM


loved the cadence...loved the words...good write...enjoyed
icequeen
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5 posted 2007-03-15 01:15 AM


ooohhhhh I like! Nice flow and excellent choice of words "chains of hate have come undone".  Really well done


Caroline

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-03-15 06:52 AM


this was a glorious ride mentally, especially the part where she lets go of hate....


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