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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wanderlust fancies in dreams of adventure challenge the soul like christian’s journey odyssey charms invade like cartographers charts… voyages of life’s expeditions contrasting the sources comparing the dawns erasing expectations myriads of illiads, as homer on seas of kon-tiki treks pathways to rome… roaming the desert’s bouquet fragrances flowering in series of wandering envy star-crest as star-crossed wanderlust wanders in circles of home |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Circling thoughts , wonderfully expressed Hope |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I really enjoyed this - it was like reading a little traveler's journal  Nicely done!Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."myriads of illiads, as homer on seas of kon-tiki treks"... Sensational lines here... never cease to amaze my eyes! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"erasing expectations" This piece spoke to me of being stuck at home dreaming in circles, and envying others of their adventures yet never taking the necessary steps to escape out into the world to explore and find new experiences of their own. Wow....this is a good one! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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