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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
There is poetry in the silence Words floating to the ground Gently falling Slowly settling onto the page on the backs of snowflakes Piling one upon another Jostling for position Gleefully giggling “You go over there and I get to be in the middle” “No, No! It’s MY turn to be in the middle” Laughter fills my heart As words tumble upon words Spilling into sentences Drifting into paragraphs Filling my world with frosty delight and poetry. aziza |
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Sphinxen Junior Member
since 2007-03-03
Posts 38U.S. |
That's a sweet feeling is'nt it? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It really is. Thank you for sharing the moment with me and for understanding what I tried to share. A |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I can certainly think of worse things to fill one's life with. Well said, aziza. Enjoyed! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for sharing my snowy, snuggly day. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Having lived in Florida my entire life, I've seen snow only twice - what little bit managed to make its way here. The way you describe it makes me want to roll in it! And... it also brought to mind a memory of my two sisters and I, when we were little, fighting for the middle seat in the back of the car LoL! I wanted the middle so I could see out the front windshield. My little sister always won, though, as she was prone to motion sickness if she was by the window. Guess we all won then, no?  Lovely write, this. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Maybe one day we can make snow angels and write words in the pristine white. Who knows where our paths may lead us. Thinking of you and thanking you. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what Caroline said was what I thought of too me and my two brothers... and the snow twice was wonderful though it didn't stay long good write Alison |
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