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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
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0 posted 2007-03-10 12:55 PM



What happened to the eyelock between two people,
that know they know that they want the same thing that they do.  (get me?)

well i dont see it anymore.

its been too long since ive seen that gleam in the eye of anyone.
so anyone who's willing to let her soul show,
just let me see the gleam in your soul's door window.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-03-10 07:48 AM


I remember that feeling...long ago though...

I have lost hope that I will ever have it again

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-03-10 08:44 PM


Nice writing...perhaps its not your season...James
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