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James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27
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0 posted 2007-03-08 03:40 PM



(Please review this poem, and suggest a title for me)

You will come for me,

Of that I am sure,

You will hunt me down,

Till I can hide no more.

I will surrender my body,

Like I`ve done so before,

But you`ll never have my heart,

Its mine...,

Not yours!

© Copyright 2007 James McInerney - All Rights Reserved
Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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1 posted 2007-03-08 05:16 PM


The Cardiologist & Her Dog

Head Cheese & Chicken Feet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-03-10 11:06 AM


"Halfway" or "Half Giving In"

I'm not very good with titles

sounds like an issue I face sometimes for sure


~Death Reaper~
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since 2007-03-10
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3 posted 2007-03-10 04:09 PM


Honestly, I think you should think of a name when you are completly done with it.

In the dark you were my light,
a little dim, and yet so bright.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-03-10 09:00 PM


How about "Layla's Fool"...using that name for no particular reason...James
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