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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-03-08 10:40 AM



Dancing In The Moonlight

With the music playing
Feelings follow flow
Igniting the passion
As we dance the tango

Then into a slow dance
Gazing face to face
Motioning sensually
Arms tenderly embrace

Wrapped in arms of love
Our bodies as one
No need for words
While the beat goes on

Dancing in the moonlight
Embraced with love
Feelings being met
As the stars shine above

HopeĀ©2007
Link to the poem with music and graphic at the Url below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83864598.html

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2007-03-09 08:47 PM


how did this one get by without comment?  love the short pithy lines...gives the reader an almost breathless feeling...so very well done, MUST go back up...
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-03-09 11:13 PM


it's been pretty slow around here lately, yes

but you know I'll always look for you

lovely write

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