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0 posted 2007-03-08 07:51 AM




The Quiet Time

I have resting in my spirit
a sense of beauteous calm
a quiet of no explain
sagacity comes here again

~*~

through this amusing peace
see smiles of soft delight
which warms my every morn
highlights my precious night

~*~

to share with me this view
to know just the perfect one
who questions never, ever, not
the continual rise of greeting sun

~*~

here, within my quiet breast
the tranquil of peace to reign
know that this is now and when
I draw closer to you again

~*~

in this trust of quietude
trust with me this interlude
turn to me as night begins
as answer to all your whims


01.03.01



© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-03-08 01:01 PM


now how beautiful is that?

wow!

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2 posted 2007-03-08 01:21 PM


hi Sissie

"in this trust of quietude"  What a wonderful place to be!

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3 posted 2007-03-08 06:44 PM


good read
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4 posted 2007-03-08 09:22 PM




"I have resting in my spirit
a sense of beauteous calm"

indeed you have Karilea
I can feel it


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5 posted 2007-03-09 12:29 PM


Five rays, of purest Sunshine....gorgeous.

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6 posted 2007-03-09 12:53 PM


SIL, this is beautiful!  Pure heart!  *hugs*...jo
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7 posted 2007-03-09 04:31 AM


Kari darling girl, Oh my now that is utterly lovely. I only popped in to rest my eyes on beauty, and see what a beauty I found. Sensational writing and such perfect peace
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
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8 posted 2007-03-09 09:03 AM


Ed said it best.
Breathtaking Karilea.

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

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9 posted 2007-03-09 02:35 PM


A very pleasant read.

"which warms my every morn
highlights my precious night"

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