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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah Helen Our sea rolls on The ships that come to shore Are not the same as those we knew When we were young Still the sun remains the sun And the moon at night Is yet that wise old man Whose light shined on our dreams So I will brush a line or two Using the lambent residue To limn what made me sigh . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, is a little more full-bodied than your usual gift, John. I enjoyed the imagery, and images. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Sunshine Oh I had help for once. Thank you John |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful link flattered that my writing inspired in any way [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (03-08-2007 08:52 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love poetry that makes me use a dictionary...learned two new words and loved how they worked intricately with your write... |
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