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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
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0 posted 2007-03-07 08:45 PM


i think back to all the times you hurt me
and now that i think of it the only thing i can say is im sorry

im sorry you didnt know how to make the right choices
im sorry you gave into all the empty voices

everyone said it was not my fault i was juat a kid
that i should blame you for what you did
and when i was younger i didnt know any better so thats what i did

but now that im older i see
it was as hard for you as it was for me

i forgave you for what you did wrong
but the thing is i think you cant forgive your self and its been going on so long

your drowning yourself so you cant see the truth
slowing drowning you self so you dont have to face the truth

i dont understand why you just dont wake up
stop blaming yourself for all your sins so we can make up

im sorry we cant talk amymore
im sorry you continue to close the door
im sorry you dont see you still continue to hurt me

Im sorry you cant forgive you

[This message has been edited by yvetters_24 (03-07-2007 09:43 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-03-07 10:55 PM


this made me cry nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

aziza
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2 posted 2007-03-09 11:29 PM


I keep reading your poem ... and I like it more each time I do.  It's good .. and sad.

A

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