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oXKukanaXo
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since 2007-03-07
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0 posted 2007-03-07 01:42 PM


About the homeless...

Another world exsists alone,
unseen by wealthy eye.
And forgotton in the shadows,
We're left alone to die.

Our crys will go unheeded,
the streets will take its toll.
Still will stuggle onward,
Survival is our goal.

© Copyright 2007 Susan - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-03-07 09:10 PM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-03-08 07:12 AM


sad


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