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The Clouds
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The Clouds |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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I never thought much about clouds in hover above my African ground but lately I’ve craved the sun’s “go-away” and my wish has come true today. Cool is the air without the glare of humankind’s so many cares and I welcome the wind of relief from unfounded core beliefs. But the screening of sun like I hide my love elicits no pleasure from up above because the internal feel a simmering stew whenever I think of you. I beg the depart of summer’s heat wave to freshly renew my thoughts till the grave but it’s all just gravy in any case thin on the substance of soul under the skin. Love shines best under the flesh alive, untested, and totally fresh but it craves the heat of a summer’s day and a not ever wish for a “go-away” ~ because love unproved speaks of no worth down here on this planet earth! Helen / 7 March 2007 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the ending is perfect! Loved this Helen! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Dixie! I guess none of us are trained "down here" in how to handle love. |
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