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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-03-06 09:48 AM

The Weight Of Words

Suspended in reflective water drowns
Shed the pounds of verbs and nouns
To the gravity of silence

In a realm of mystic notions well
Less lost within time’s own foretell
Synapses, sparkles emotions

Bubbles gulped in air of love
Laughter exhales a breeze above
Yet words as stone, a landslide moan

The sound mutes to its shine
Knees drawn up to float, align
Shoulders square to the heart

There heaves as anchors catapult
Silence buoyant course sea of salt
So much heavier are the words

Without you

Copyright Kkh 3/6/07

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-06 09:56 AM

this is outstanding!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-03-06 10:06 AM

Kathleen~
You always touch me poignantly with your poetry~

'Bubbles gulped in air of love
Laughter exhales a breeze above'

How I admire the ink from your quill~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-03-06 10:58 AM

your poetry always manifests a certainty of charm and effervensence that is enthusiastically entertaining and I'm always loving the performance...you deliver words with a stubborn quiet which fuels the imagination and gifts a metamorphosis for the reader who owns the emotions you provoke.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-03-06 11:22 AM

Enjoyed the read! Thanks!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-03-06 11:26 AM

"There heaves as anchors catapult
Silence buoyant course sea of salt
So much heavier are the words

Without you"

Your poetry is always gratifying for the eyes, heart, and mind.
Beautiful write Kathy.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-03-06 09:11 PM

LeeJ's right
performance is the word
for your work

"Bubbles gulped in air of love
Laughter exhales a breeze above"

wonderful...

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2007-03-07 10:08 AM

beautiful write, loved these words especially

"Suspended in reflective water drowns
Shed the pounds of verbs and nouns
To the gravity of silence"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2007-03-07 11:30 AM

So much heavier are the words

Without you

mighty powerful...are words

M

he11oxNASTY
Junior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 27

9 posted 2007-03-07 01:21 PM

I loved this! Great write! I loved the rhythm of the words.

April-Lyn

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

10 posted 2007-03-07 02:59 PM

and sometimes words come in between because of their heaviness..enjoyed the read

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

11 posted 2007-03-07 06:22 PM

This Diamond,

Every time I think your writing is the greatest, then you outdo yourself again! The first verse was stunning, and the entire poem followed suit. Another for the library. Loved the ending!

Sadelite

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