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Open Poetry #40
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IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 51
Westwood, CA
0 posted 2007-03-06 07:33 AM

as on each journey there is
a silence that goes with it
to its end let us go
with each other
though the sun with its choirs of distance
rises between us though it
were to hang there in the past like a day
that would burn unmoved forever
and only we went on
each alone each with nothing
but a silence
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-03-06 10:08 AM

this touched me

wow
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2007-03-06 10:51 AM

a deciding factor and finale which incredibly touches the reader with a deep emptiness...well done
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