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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-03-05 03:09 PM



When we want the truth
and we're surrounded by lies
when noone knows
except what's in thier heart
where 2 become 1
and truth becomes wise



~~~kingsangel~~~

© Copyright 2007 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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1 posted 2007-03-05 11:26 PM


Interesting thought in this poem.  I keep reading it.

A

spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
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2 posted 2007-03-16 04:11 AM


your really good i had to read that twice to make sure it was what i though.

In love I start to realize that some things only seemed to be what they were.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2007-03-16 07:08 AM


I'm happy it becomes wise, cuz sometimes people are lied to so much, it is difficult, and painful to deciper if trust, fidelity, and decency still lives.  Good one!!!
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