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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2007-03-05 02:05 PM


So cute when you call

I am always lost for spoken words…
almost any words…
I dream entangled in ivy,
or grossly entwined in brier…
sometimes speechless,
never thoughtless,
mostly on purpose
not ever by mistake;
yet with fault, unmistakable…
However, now I am free to speak in broken words
and loosely defined sustenance for brain cells,
now that I can converse with you…
You have “the knack:”
You make the conversation easy
smooth as silk, like buttermilk or
melting butter on fresh baked biscuits
or cheddar cheese on home-made apple pie.
I am always knocked over by a feather
when my telephone rings, and there you are
too sweet, too kind, always guiding to an agreed matter
nothing incontrovertible, and you do use some caution,
but careful is good and so well applied,
our conversations are most soothing
and very interesting…

Just a small note to say thank you
for being so cute when you call…


© Copyright 2007 JL - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-03-05 02:32 PM


JL~
Now I'm here to tell you that's just the cutest little sweet thang I've read today~
ADORABLE !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2007-03-06 10:23 AM


one of your many unique qualities...your strength in ability to listen and perceive...

your a grab bag full of intelligence....

now...may I please have one of those home made biscuts, with saug. gravy?

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2007-03-06 11:24 AM


What a lovely thank you note and how lucky you are to have someone like that to send it to.  Enjoyed!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2007-03-08 10:20 PM


I dream entangled in ivy,
or grossly entwined in brier…
sometimes speechless,
never thoughtless,
mostly on purpose
not ever by mistake;
yet with fault, unmistakable…

~*~

Approachable....

Wonderful.


ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2007-03-08 10:31 PM


Kids are cool!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2007-03-08 11:09 PM


JL....you are too cute!  Sounds like a match to me.   ....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2007-03-09 11:38 PM


well, I wasn't hungry before I read this but now I'm starving!

loved it!

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