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Open Poetry #40
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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-03-04 04:00 PM


i should've made it plain like Danity Kane

that "I'd Ride For You" even if you couldn't rap to me better than Big Daddy Kane

   although our trip to Barcelona, Spain

is more than a few years overdue

the extra training was necessary

          you're not my adversary

         it's just that from the moment i met you

i couldn't have known

your dreams were tall enough to pursue

                my golden years



                                                   love,

                                                   Eve
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-03-05 06:17 AM

oh just beautiful Howard! Eve speaks some truth here   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
howardtsu
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2 posted 2007-03-05 07:01 PM

thanks roniece  
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