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Madcap
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since 2007-03-03
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0 posted 2007-03-04 03:07 PM



Out on stage, and the lights are low
Starting up pulsing steady and slow
Glad you could turn up for the show!
Now lay back to the frantic solo, yeah

Oh! Freak-out to a timeless daydream, baby
Take a trip to a cosmic space in time
Keep your electric eyes on me, girl!

Never thought I’d see so many people
Smiling and waving and looking so fine
Spinning round, electric lights moving very fast
Through the beating hours of time!

Oh! Freak-out on a space age daydream, baby
Take a trip to a far-out place in time
Just keep your electric eyes on me, girl!

Winding down, the lights grow low
Still buzzing from that space-cadet glow
Floating inside a hazy cosmic tide
Glad you could all take a ride!

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ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 83

1 posted 2007-03-04 04:33 PM


This is interesting. I gathered it was likely written out of boredom? Seems most of mine were. I really gotta post more then I do. Anyway I enjoyed reading this. I thought of my Abigail while reading it. If a poem can trigger great memories or let the reader see an image then its good.
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