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IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-03-04 05:46 AM


candles counting
rough hours
I feel the air
I feel the end
and I don't want to pray

her smile is
a long fading chance
quietly leaving life a mess

I don't want to pray
No, don't feel that way


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-03-04 07:44 AM


I can relate to this in a way


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